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指南者留學 史義梅 2024年04月29日 閱讀量:2050
<p><span style="color: #262626;">中式英語(Chinglish)指帶有漢語詞匯、語法、表達習慣的英語,是一種具有中國特色的語言。</span></p> <div data-page-id="FINTd0Cgmo66kJxbyitc7vbInzf" data-docx-has-block-data="true"> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Ge8Dd9uEDoDD15xIGawcU2RDnve"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LxXqdsblHoV9coxUvwDc6Jrenle"><span style="color: #262626;">在使用英語時,因受漢語思維方式或文化的影響而拼造出不符合英語表達習慣的,具有中國特征的英語。這是中國人在學習英語過程中出現的,是必然的一種語言現象。本文總結了幾種常見中式英語(Chinglish)的特點,從而幫助讀者能寫出更加規(guī)范和正宗的英語。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LxXqdsblHoV9coxUvwDc6Jrenle"><span style="color: #ffffff;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h1 class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-OSShdIT5Oo4N9yxaQADcZNEWnOu"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>Part One: 詞匯</strong></span></h1> <div class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-OSShdIT5Oo4N9yxaQADcZNEWnOu"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSyuduljRo0iCXxQnjDcdUbdneh"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>核心要義</strong>:&ldquo;如果一個詞在句子中沒有發(fā)揮任何作用,那它就應該被刪掉&rdquo;。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSyuduljRo0iCXxQnjDcdUbdneh"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-LoKqdSYtUoNOJPxwcNsc55mUngf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">名詞</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-LoKqdSYtUoNOJPxwcNsc55mUngf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、形容詞+名詞</strong>,有時候可以用單個名詞表達;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Competitive <strong>advantages</strong> After: Competitiveness</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:<strong>shinning points </strong>After:strengths</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、抽象名詞</strong>通常是不必要的,要多加觀察和思考;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:Consumption <strong>pattern </strong>After: Consumption 消費(模式)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: assignment about the<strong> ethics case </strong>After: assignment on <strong>ethics </strong>道德倫理(情況)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">句子中其他成分里已經<strong>包括了一個名詞的含義</strong>,這個名詞就是多余的;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Driven by the curiosity <strong>of finding the answers</strong>. After: Driven by curiosity</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">注意 some<strong> noun of noun</strong> 這種結構, 可以直接noun+noun</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: the structure of each language After: language structure</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: refer to <strong>materials of the company </strong>After: refer to the company&rsquo;s materials</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: behavioural patterns of human beings After: human beings&rsquo; behavioural patterns</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>3、地道用詞</strong></span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:research<strong> attitude </strong> After:research mindset</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: past twenty years After: last two decades</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: learning enthusiasm After: aptitude</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-DRhvdkzb7ouX12xt4XkcFtZSntg"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>動詞</strong></span></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-DRhvdkzb7ouX12xt4XkcFtZSntg"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、萬能動詞 + 名詞</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FA2odwqekoHdNMxuar5cXXn3n6b"><span style="color: #262626;">此處動詞之所以多余是因為他們沒能承擔「相應的動作」,反而這種責任是由后面名詞完成的,因此不如直接把后面的<strong>名詞給動詞化</strong>。這些動詞是易錯對象:make,have,give,achieve,conduct, carry out;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FA2odwqekoHdNMxuar5cXXn3n6b"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:Tang Yubing prefers to<strong> make exhaustive analysis</strong> research from different angles.</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OE88dHkVEoxa38x1QtjcXF59nTc"><span style="color: #262626;">After:Tang Yubing prefers to<strong> exhaustively analyze</strong> research from different angles.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OE88dHkVEoxa38x1QtjcXF59nTc"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、多余動詞+多余名詞 (+第三個詞)</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CoAddO8kpovUKlxW61DcMnMInfc"><span style="color: #262626;">此時,不僅動詞沒能表達特定含義,連后面的名詞也放棄治療了,導致這一個動詞和一個名詞表達的含義都十分模糊。那么,只能<strong>由第三個詞</strong>來承擔表示確切含義的責任。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CoAddO8kpovUKlxW61DcMnMInfc"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: reach the goal of modernization After: to modernize</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>3、動詞+動詞 可以直接動詞替換</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-I7ytdvId4oTa8QxDvZYcOX9Inef"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Before: </strong>Another unforgettable experience <strong>let me see </strong>the pivotal role of in-depth study of Chinese culture.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-I7ytdvId4oTa8QxDvZYcOX9Inef"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AqXbdVgVnoVLoKxwyFScD7Ainjf"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong> After: </strong>Another unforgettable experience<strong> exposed </strong>me to the pivotal role of in-depth study of Chinese culture.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AqXbdVgVnoVLoKxwyFScD7Ainjf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>4、地道用詞</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:<strong>Study </strong>management After:Major in management</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:<strong>see </strong>a bigger world After:discover a bigger world</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:<strong> add </strong>managerial knowledge After:<strong> </strong><strong>improve</strong> managerial knowledge</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I<strong> feel </strong>delighted to recommend Miss LI After: I <strong>am</strong> delighted to recommend Miss LI</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I was pleased to<strong> know </strong>that Li <strong> </strong> After: I was pleased to <strong>discover</strong> that Li<strong> </strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-GhsNdI8cco9B2exGnxCcH3hvneb"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">修飾詞</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-GhsNdI8cco9B2exGnxCcH3hvneb"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、冗余修飾詞</strong>&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">某些修飾詞的含義已經<strong>蘊含于被修飾詞</strong>中</span></div> <div>&nbsp;</div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">His <strong>own</strong> opinions (如果不是用于特別強調是「他」的,就是多余的)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">His <strong>individual</strong> views</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>valuable</strong> asset (a person or thing that is <strong>valuable </strong>or useful to somebody/something)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">my <strong>deeper </strong>exploration (不用比較級的情況下是可接受的)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ESsvdtdo0o2f6pxKNYDcjE8pnbv"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>時間副詞</strong>:有些動詞已經暗含時間狀態(tài)了</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ESsvdtdo0o2f6pxKNYDcjE8pnbv"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Previously</strong>...we used to</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、程度詞 往往會在情緒、主動性上使用過度</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">her <strong>stunning </strong>success</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Heated </strong>debate</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: extremely important After: essential</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: absolutely want to After: were determined to</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: after <strong>actively</strong> communicating with the other students in class <strong>discussions</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZWt8dapg0of1scxLX8UcvhORnEh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: after lively discussions with his classmates</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZWt8dapg0of1scxLX8UcvhORnEh"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">to <strong>successfully </strong>accomplish</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">felt <strong>very </strong>honoured</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">It is <strong>quite </strong>important to ....</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">The impact will be <strong>quite </strong>huge</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-SOyId27wkobNRIxFIZ3cBlTknZb"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">代詞</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-SOyId27wkobNRIxFIZ3cBlTknZb"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BHGWdVnpBogDTzx1WEVcUFZTn7e"><span style="color: #262626;">中式英語中代詞也是最容易被用錯的一類詞。漢語里代詞的劃分其實不如英語多,因此,英語中有些代詞在漢語中并沒有明確的翻譯方法,Chinglish中就會出現很多代詞使用不正確的現象。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BHGWdVnpBogDTzx1WEVcUFZTn7e"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OshJd4ju1oYNkxxiI4VcVbzOnRb"><span style="color: #262626;">但代詞的正確用法其實也非常簡單,一言以蔽之就是:每個代詞必須指向一個先行詞,即代詞是指代的誰。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OshJd4ju1oYNkxxiI4VcVbzOnRb"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-QEMYdnJkloHeI3xe7n5cIGuGnMg"><span style="color: #262626;">每個代詞所替代的,就是那個先行詞了。而先行詞的正確用法為:要被明確寫出、無二義、與代詞近、語法正確。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-QEMYdnJkloHeI3xe7n5cIGuGnMg"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I will take advantage of your well-designed modules, especially <strong>those </strong>combine music, film, and audio technologies closely, such as Creating with Technology, Sound Shaping Design, Audiovisual Composition, Field recording etc. (those后面接的是一個句子,缺少關系代詞)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-B68Zdf363oYId0x1AdPc1KMmnwb"><span style="color: #262626;">After: I will take advantage of your well-designed modules, especially <strong>those that </strong>combine music, film, and audio technologies closely, such as Creating with Technology, Sound Shaping Design, and Audiovisual Composition, Field recording etc.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-B68Zdf363oYId0x1AdPc1KMmnwb"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Besides, Reid School of Music is equipped with Alison House, Reid Studio, two 360 audio mixing spaces and other advanced hardware and software equipment, <strong>which </strong>are conducive to sound studies. (指代不明)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OgfLdCmMBo7wHzxNI3Bc0qGmn7b"><span style="color: #262626;">After: The Reid School of Music is equipped with Alison House, Reid Studio, two 360 audio mixing spaces and other advanced hardware and software equipment, <strong>all of which</strong> will be assets to my studies.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OgfLdCmMBo7wHzxNI3Bc0qGmn7b"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-KDOEducvXo4Cskx5inncYsRZnYd"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">冗余雙生詞</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-KDOEducvXo4Cskx5inncYsRZnYd"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-TagTdG1v4oCWrMxGRz2clJxvnmP"><span style="color: #262626;">兩個含義相同的詞并列使用,雖在中文中能加強語氣避免歧義,但英語中完全是不必要的。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-TagTdG1v4oCWrMxGRz2clJxvnmP"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">因此,要注意第二個詞是否真的補充了第一個詞的含義,以及只有一個詞是否就能恰當地表達原文意思,再對這類錯誤進行甄別。</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>如何消除冗余</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-PTxmdsVsdoZHJSxRfyWcv8tWnDh"><span style="color: #262626;">最簡單的方法是:刪去其中一個,或選另外一個詞替換這倆詞。若這種方法不能達到等價替代的效果,則對原有表達進行擴充,使其含義更精確。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-PTxmdsVsdoZHJSxRfyWcv8tWnDh"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>help and assistance</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">in a clear <strong>logic and rigorous </strong>structure</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">showed their <strong>doubt and objection</strong> to my decision</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>preciseness and rigor</strong></span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-ZCPSdPJN0oQb1QxbdwmcuNAfntd" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;3e577f75-3d6f-406f-9ed7-f8d11893210d&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:618,&quot;width&quot;:1200,&quot;currHeight&quot;:618,&quot;currWidth&quot;:1200,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:618,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:1200,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FK3YXbIXcJoEZudxBz6Bccma4nVe%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;K3YXbIXcJoEZudxBz6Bccma4nVe&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:103837,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;<img style="display: block; 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(一句話60個詞)</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UL6TduyjIorcCcxoQkZcfPW5n9d">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UL6TduyjIorcCcxoQkZcfPW5n9d"><span style="color: #262626;">After: &hellip;, my independent research and technical leadership skills were also greatly strengthened. <strong>These experiences</strong> have given me the confidence to take on harder challenges in the postgraduate period.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d">&nbsp;</div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d"><span style="color: #262626;">通過拆成兩個簡單句,分別突出個人技能和它們對深造的幫助。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-UuVLdBmNso9suXxXcbmcGKrDnPF" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{&quot;items&quot;:[{&quot;uuid&quot;:&quot;8acb8d1c-3d72-435d-8037-6e317149d282&quot;,&quot;height&quot;:536,&quot;width&quot;:760,&quot;currHeight&quot;:536,&quot;currWidth&quot;:760,&quot;natrualHeight&quot;:536,&quot;natrualWidth&quot;:760,&quot;pluginName&quot;:&quot;imageUpload&quot;,&quot;scale&quot;:1,&quot;src&quot;:&quot;https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FGcLWbc4nnoUEpqxXGUscdpX9nVf%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16&quot;,&quot;file_token&quot;:&quot;GcLWbc4nnoUEpqxXGUscdpX9nVf&quot;,&quot;image_type&quot;:&quot;image/png&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:284800,&quot;comments&quot;:[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714381120260/1714381120260.png" width="467" height="330" /></span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BNoxdQOFMoYjlvx1sCOciWGCnnh"> <div class="heading-8"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">平行結構</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8">&nbsp;</div> <div class="heading-8"><span style="color: #262626;">其實就是那些最常見的 and/or 連接兩個從句的結構。而使用這種「排比」方法時,需要保證幾部分都具有相同的語法成分(跟對對聯、寫詩一樣)。</span></div> <div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-X54ddTDKyoLIhYx4Wh9c5AglnMh">&nbsp;</div> </div> </div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I have observed his diligence and intelligence, and been sure that he would be a qualified candidate for your program. (前后不對稱)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NtupdHY6kotx6rxf2EMc89R3nYc"><span style="color: #262626;">After: The diligence and intelligence he displayed during his time as my colleague makes him an excellently qualified candidate for your program。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NtupdHY6kotx6rxf2EMc89R3nYc"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-THCudANdFoyncjxF8D4cxU7onAh"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">邏輯連接</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-THCudANdFoyncjxF8D4cxU7onAh"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NgwGd46cqotL6Ox25bxc1zsUnJe"><span style="color: #262626;">語句成分之間的連接(如also, in addition)在漢語中其實經常被忽略,去掉這些邏輯連接成分可能在漢語中無足輕重,但許多時候,這些成分往往是英語中比較關鍵的地方。英語中這些成分一定要「顯式」地寫出來。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NgwGd46cqotL6Ox25bxc1zsUnJe"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: During our contact, I have been fully convinced of her personal quality and ability,<strong> which I believe </strong>will make her a deserving candidate for you.</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Hxk3dUOiXojA6ixl9FPc1tBxnzf"><span style="color: #262626;">After: During the time I have known Yanying, I have always been impressed by both her personal and professional qualities, <strong>therefore I believe</strong> she is a deserving candidate for your master&rsquo;s program.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Hxk3dUOiXojA6ixl9FPc1tBxnzf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-U6HMdaoIkoPHmExF6d1cSofqnEf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">開篇太虛</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-U6HMdaoIkoPHmExF6d1cSofqnEf"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EnysdZQFeoCEx5x0GGdcZRSknVU"><span style="color: #262626;">漢語通常不把主要觀點放在句子開頭,而是把寫作目的、地點、原因、事例或現狀放在主題句,作為引言。但是這將削弱主要觀點的重要性,使得讀者認為作者沒有直接切題。因此,主要的觀點一定要將其放在句子的最開始部分,其后再陳述地點、原因等。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EnysdZQFeoCEx5x0GGdcZRSknVU"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: <strong>To be specific, being interested in sound design,</strong> I hope to pursue further studies in this domain to prepare myself for my future career path.</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-T52ZdxmE8oPUSDxyo3ycf8Benoh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: I also hope to pursue further studies in order to prepare myself for my future career path.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-DsG5dNJRdoiowOxRnERcn2FDn1f"><span style="color: #262626;">&nbsp;</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ABBCddJ3ooDJsLxlH4YcXH3WnIb"><span style="color: #262626;">總而言之,中式英語通常因受到漢語的影響,導致在單詞選擇、句子結構和表達方式上與英語習慣不符。本文從詞匯和句子兩部分分析了中式英語的常見錯誤,并提供了改正后的例子。旨在幫助讀者通過識別和改正中式英語的特點,提升英語寫作的規(guī)范性和地道性。</span></div> </div> <div class="qrcode-content-wrapper" contenteditable="false"> <div style="position: absolute; top: 4157px; left: 182px; z-index: 2;" contenteditable="false">&nbsp;</div> <div style="position: absolute; top: 5463px; left: 190px; z-index: 2;" contenteditable="false">&nbsp;</div> </div>
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