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2024年08月01日
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<p>在當(dāng)今競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的商科申請(qǐng)大軍中,文社科背景的學(xué)生面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn),他們不僅需要展現(xiàn)自己對(duì)目標(biāo)商科項(xiàng)目的特性和要求有深入的理解,還要有相關(guān)的專業(yè)能力,并基于此準(zhǔn)備對(duì)口的申請(qǐng)文書。在接下來的內(nèi)容中,我們將通過F同學(xué)的申請(qǐng)經(jīng)歷,探討我們?nèi)绾瓮ㄟ^精心準(zhǔn)備的文書,展現(xiàn)其跨學(xué)科能力和申請(qǐng)動(dòng)機(jī),幫助他成功獲得大滿貫的。</p>
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<h1><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>前期準(zhǔn)備:</strong></span></h1>
<p><br />作為英語專業(yè)的學(xué)生,F(xiàn)同學(xué)跨申數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)和管理兩個(gè)方向,且每個(gè)方向下的項(xiàng)目也有著不一樣的側(cè)重點(diǎn)。在我收到他的定校和文書提綱后,如何體現(xiàn)他相關(guān)的專業(yè)能力,以及針對(duì)不同項(xiàng)目的側(cè)重點(diǎn)對(duì)文書進(jìn)行個(gè)性化寫作是我首先考慮的問題,在仔細(xì)研究了他的科研和實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷,以及每個(gè)項(xiàng)目的培養(yǎng)目標(biāo)和課程設(shè)置之后,我撰寫了每個(gè)項(xiàng)目的寫作思路并主動(dòng)地與他進(jìn)行了語音溝通。</p>
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<h1><strong><span style="color: #ffffff;">針對(duì)性文書如何撰寫?</span></strong></h1>
<h2><br /><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)方向:</span></strong></h2>
<p><br />在杜倫大學(xué)Master of Data Science的PS中,我們由相關(guān)的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)作為切入點(diǎn)凸顯他體會(huì)到城市數(shù)字化建設(shè)的重要性,因此未來想要在這方面有所建樹,這就自然而然地引出了他的職業(yè)規(guī)劃——短期內(nèi)在咨詢公司做數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)家,長(zhǎng)期目標(biāo)是想成為數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)團(tuán)隊(duì)負(fù)責(zé)人,帶領(lǐng)團(tuán)隊(duì)為客戶提供高質(zhì)量的數(shù)據(jù)驅(qū)動(dòng)解決方案。在接下來的段落中,我們重點(diǎn)從課程設(shè)置和學(xué)校資源兩方面說明該項(xiàng)目對(duì)于實(shí)現(xiàn)他的職業(yè)規(guī)劃具體有什么幫助,以及通過他的科研和實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷體現(xiàn)“why me”這一點(diǎn),最后表達(dá)他深耕數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué)方向的決心和為中國(guó)的數(shù)字化建設(shè)做貢獻(xiàn)的愿景(與首段呼應(yīng))。</p>
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<p>華威MASc Data Visualisation項(xiàng)目很看重申請(qǐng)者的跨學(xué)科學(xué)習(xí)能力,且對(duì)PS有4500字符的字?jǐn)?shù)要求,所以在這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的PS中,我們沒有直接套用杜倫大學(xué)PS中的內(nèi)容,而是挖掘了他兩段跨學(xué)科研究經(jīng)歷,以此來體現(xiàn)他跨學(xué)科研究和數(shù)據(jù)分析能力。同時(shí),因?yàn)檫@個(gè)項(xiàng)目側(cè)重的是數(shù)據(jù)可視化,而不是泛泛的數(shù)據(jù)科學(xué),所以職業(yè)規(guī)劃部分我們也做了調(diào)整——短期內(nèi)做數(shù)據(jù)可視化設(shè)計(jì)師,長(zhǎng)期目標(biāo)是成為數(shù)據(jù)可視化顧問,幫助組織和企業(yè)利用數(shù)據(jù)可視化來驅(qū)動(dòng)決策、解決問題和實(shí)現(xiàn)業(yè)務(wù)目標(biāo)。</p>
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<h2><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">管理方向:</span></strong></h2>
<p><br />在格拉斯哥大學(xué)MSc Management項(xiàng)目的PS中,我們描寫了F同學(xué)如何通過一場(chǎng)ERP沙盤模擬及管理決策比賽體會(huì)到企業(yè)的管理決策需要面對(duì)的多方面特殊挑戰(zhàn),因此想要通過研究生的學(xué)習(xí)在這個(gè)領(lǐng)域深入探索的,在接下來的段落中,我們又從課程設(shè)置和學(xué)校資源兩方面說明該項(xiàng)目可以如何促進(jìn)他對(duì)于管理領(lǐng)域的了解,以及他于課程學(xué)習(xí)、在比賽和社會(huì)實(shí)踐中擔(dān)任過多次團(tuán)隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)、審計(jì)項(xiàng)目中積累的扎實(shí)的理論基礎(chǔ)和豐富的實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn)。</p>
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<p>值得注意的是,F(xiàn)同學(xué)在擔(dān)任團(tuán)隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)的過程中跟許多同學(xué)一樣,都是基礎(chǔ)的分任務(wù)、對(duì)進(jìn)度,但是文書中我們對(duì)這樣的經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行了潤(rùn)色,重點(diǎn)突出了他如何帶領(lǐng)團(tuán)隊(duì)解決突發(fā)問題,有效地與團(tuán)隊(duì)成員及其他相關(guān)方溝通和協(xié)作,以及鼓勵(lì)團(tuán)隊(duì)成員創(chuàng)新思維;此外,F(xiàn)同學(xué)在參加針對(duì)一家擬上市企業(yè)的審計(jì)項(xiàng)目時(shí)并沒有做過跟管理關(guān)系相關(guān)的工作,因此我們又對(duì)該經(jīng)歷進(jìn)行了潤(rùn)色,重點(diǎn)說明他通過此經(jīng)歷意識(shí)到企業(yè)管理的復(fù)雜性,最終想要加強(qiáng)自身管理知識(shí)和技能。</p>
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<p>在杜倫大學(xué)MSc Management (International Business)項(xiàng)目的PS中,我們又對(duì)內(nèi)容做了調(diào)整,以更符合該項(xiàng)目國(guó)際商務(wù)的側(cè)重點(diǎn),例如開頭部分我們重點(diǎn)描寫了他如何在審計(jì)項(xiàng)目中發(fā)現(xiàn)擬在海外上市的企業(yè)在團(tuán)隊(duì)的跨文化溝通,國(guó)際市場(chǎng)研究和定位,國(guó)際品牌建設(shè)等方面的諸多挑戰(zhàn),因此想要通過研究生的學(xué)習(xí)更深地探索擬上市企業(yè)如何才能建立良好的國(guó)際合作關(guān)系和網(wǎng)絡(luò),持續(xù)適應(yīng)國(guó)際市場(chǎng)的變化,在接下來的擇校原因、職業(yè)規(guī)劃和總結(jié)段落中,我們重點(diǎn)圍繞著“擬上市公司”這個(gè)點(diǎn)對(duì)PS內(nèi)容做了調(diào)整,最后的總結(jié)段落也表達(dá)了他想要幫助擬上市企業(yè)進(jìn)軍國(guó)際舞臺(tái)的決心,以此與開頭提到的愿景呼應(yīng)。</p>
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<p>華威大學(xué)MSc Management要求在PS中回答這幾個(gè)問題:</p>
<p><br />1. Why have you selected this course? What are your motivating factors?(為什么要申請(qǐng)這個(gè)項(xiàng)目,動(dòng)機(jī)是什么)</p>
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<p>2. How do you see the course impacting your career plans?(這個(gè)項(xiàng)目如何影響你的職業(yè)規(guī)劃)</p>
<p><br />3. What experience will you contribute to your cohort? (你可以為同學(xué)群體帶來哪些經(jīng)驗(yàn))</p>
<p><br />4. How do you align with our CORE values?(你如何與我們的核心價(jià)值觀相契合) </p>
<p><br />5. What is your proudest achievement?(最自豪的成就是什么)</p>
<p><br />針對(duì)這五個(gè)問題,我們并沒有單純的套用其他管理方向的PS,而是在通過和F同學(xué)的腦暴溝通挖掘出了相關(guān)的經(jīng)歷,最終將這些經(jīng)歷整合成了一篇邏輯合理、符合PS要求的文書。</p>
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<p>利茲大學(xué)MSc Management Consulting項(xiàng)目旨在給學(xué)生提供管理咨詢行業(yè)的專業(yè)知識(shí),如果只是單純的套用管理方向的PS肯定是不夠的,但是F同學(xué)也確實(shí)沒有管理咨詢方面的經(jīng)歷。因此,在這個(gè)項(xiàng)目的文書中,我們將他的職業(yè)規(guī)劃放在首段作為興趣起源(申請(qǐng)動(dòng)機(jī)),接著描述該項(xiàng)目的課程設(shè)置和學(xué)校資源可以如何幫助他實(shí)現(xiàn)職業(yè)規(guī)劃。在經(jīng)歷部分,我們重點(diǎn)描寫了他的課程學(xué)習(xí),擔(dān)任團(tuán)隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)和ERP沙盤模擬比賽的經(jīng)歷是如何鍛煉他與該項(xiàng)目相契合的能力的。</p>
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<p>看過文書初稿之后,F(xiàn)同學(xué)十分滿意,稍加確認(rèn)修改后就全部定稿,定稿后我們便加急遞交了申請(qǐng),最終大滿貫的結(jié)果也總算是功夫不負(fù)有心人。</p>
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<p>在人生的賽程中,每一份努力和汗水都將被時(shí)間所銘記。從文社科到商科的,F(xiàn)同學(xué)的申請(qǐng)之路展現(xiàn)了他無畏的決心和敢于挑戰(zhàn)的勇氣。無論面臨怎樣的挑戰(zhàn)和困難,只要有毅力和意志,即使跨越不同領(lǐng)域的申請(qǐng)難關(guān),也能實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的大滿貫。只要腳踏實(shí)地、努力拼搏,不斷追求自己的目標(biāo),總會(huì)有回報(bào)的一天。</p>
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