<p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p"><img src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1692944014442/1692944014442.png" width="802" height="60" /></span></p> <p><span class="p"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/info_imgUrl_phpS6rVro.jpg" width="300" height="300" /></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="http://pnemnih.cn/adviser_16374_1" target="_blank" rel="noopener"><span style="text-decoration: underline;"><span class="p" style="color: #1dadff; text-decoration: underline;">吳文靜</span></span></a></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">2022年度&ldquo;創(chuàng)意先鋒獎(jiǎng)&rdquo;，具備扎實(shí)的英語功底，專注商科和化學(xué)材料大類的英文文書寫作，從專業(yè)的視角為學(xué)生提供個(gè)性化的文書寫作服務(wù)，以認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)的態(tài)度陪伴每一位學(xué)員，幫助學(xué)生斬獲港、澳、新、英等多國名校錄取。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">我們的許多學(xué)員在準(zhǔn)備不同方向申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目的個(gè)人陳述時(shí)，基于同一段經(jīng)歷準(zhǔn)備的寫作素材大都是一樣的，往往是對(duì)于科研或者實(shí)習(xí)內(nèi)容的羅列，而忽略了不同項(xiàng)目的側(cè)重點(diǎn)。為此，<strong>我認(rèn)為針對(duì)同一經(jīng)歷在不同申請(qǐng)方向的PS中，應(yīng)當(dāng)基于申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目?jī)?nèi)容來深入挖掘其經(jīng)歷，從而呈現(xiàn)出與申請(qǐng)項(xiàng)目相契合的內(nèi)容</strong>。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">學(xué)員背景：文書中提及的學(xué)員本科主修英語，輔修ACCA，畢業(yè)后在安永會(huì)計(jì)師事務(wù)所工作，因此定位為工作后留學(xué)，所以在PS中重點(diǎn)突出工作經(jīng)歷（無論是從篇幅上還是寫作順序上），弱化了本科背景。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">今天#<strong>心動(dòng)的文書</strong>#欄目，老師就跟大家分享一下如何通過描寫自己的經(jīng)歷來突出自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)，表達(dá)自己對(duì)該專業(yè)和未來的熱情和追求，從而吸引招生官。（<strong>下劃線加粗為好詞好句，大家可以收藏積累哦~</strong>）</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1dadff;"><strong><span class="h1">PS Sample</span></strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">Attending courses set by my undergraduate minor degree&mdash;ACCA changed my stereotype of accounting.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【本科輔修ACCA改變了對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)的刻板印象】</span></strong>Through the teacher&rsquo;s vivid explanations on the cases close to life, I became increasingly aware that accounting was not only limited to accounts, but also focused on collecting, analysing and interpreting the financial information, as well as researching the application of accounting standards in different industries. Since then, I have realised that accounting is a discipline worthy of further exploration. What especially sparked my keen interest, and solidified my determination to pursue higher education in this field was my working experience at Ernst &amp; Young Hua Ming LLP after graduating from university.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【畢業(yè)后在安永的工作經(jīng)歷進(jìn)一步激發(fā)了我對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)領(lǐng)域的興趣，并下定決心深造】</span></strong>It is noteworthy that I was pleasantly surprised by accounting information&rsquo;s role in revealing the impact of social events, policies and technology on enterprises and even the whole industry&rsquo;s growth, except for reflecting an enterprise&rsquo; operating results and financial status. Therefore, I was convinced that accurate interpretation of financial data is crucial for a financial practitioner. Knowing this, I have determined to pursue higher education in accountancy to cultivate my data sensitivity and enrich my expertise, so as to provide support for enterprise decision-making from an accounting perspective.</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">興趣起源中緊密圍繞和會(huì)計(jì)相關(guān)的經(jīng)歷來展開描述，首先是本科階段輔修ACCA的經(jīng)歷改變了對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)科的刻板印象，對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)科有了進(jìn)一步認(rèn)識(shí)，提出觀點(diǎn)：會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)科值得深入探索；接著畢業(yè)后在會(huì)計(jì)師事務(wù)所的工作經(jīng)歷進(jìn)一步激發(fā)了我對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)領(lǐng)域的濃厚興趣，并闡述接觸到實(shí)際的審計(jì)工作后對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)這一學(xué)科的認(rèn)識(shí)，基于以上認(rèn)識(shí)，決心在會(huì)計(jì)領(lǐng)域深造。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">Tips: 在PS中，特別是申請(qǐng)動(dòng)機(jī)陳述時(shí)，應(yīng)該以&ldquo;我&rdquo;為主，從&ldquo;我&rdquo;出發(fā)，多闡述你對(duì)申請(qǐng)學(xué)科的認(rèn)識(shí)和看法～</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">As mentioned, working at Ernst &amp; Young Hua Ming LLP greatly deepened my understanding of accounting while allowing me to identify what I genuinely favour for and aspire to take as a lifelong career.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【在會(huì)計(jì)師事務(wù)所的工作經(jīng)歷大大加深了&ldquo;我&rdquo;對(duì)會(huì)計(jì)的理解，也讓&ldquo;我&rdquo;找到了自己真正喜歡和渴望的終身職業(yè)，為下段引出職業(yè)規(guī)劃做鋪墊】</span></strong>There, working as an assistant auditor initially, I was quickly and acutely aware that being an excellent auditor needed to perform well in completing audit procedures and writing analysis reports, and to keep taking in knowledge in accounting and economics and develop my soft power. Hence, I took the initiative to probe into HKFRS and the PRC National Standard to gain more expertise, and taught myself SQL to improve my efficiency in data processing and cleaning.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【自主學(xué)習(xí)意識(shí)并付諸行動(dòng)】</span></strong>Shortly thereafter, with my earnest working attitude and distinguished capacity, I won high praise from my manager and partners, which resulted in being assigned more challenging tasks. Notably, I was promoted to Senior Auditor as a result of my high performance in 2021 and served as the field in charge of the audit team.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【工作期間得到提升】</span></strong>During my leadership, I kept perfecting the audit plan, led members to implement the audit procedures in an orderly fashion, and accurately controlled the project&rsquo;s progress. With the joint efforts of our team, the project was successfully delivered.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【工作中的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力得到體現(xiàn)】</span></strong>In retrospect, although I have achieved some great things in the field of auditing, I know very well that mastery of systematic and professional accounting knowledge will be crucial to my career success.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【結(jié)尾處承上啟下，雖然取得了一些成就，但是系統(tǒng)專業(yè)的會(huì)計(jì)知識(shí)是職業(yè)成功的先決條件，可以順理成章引出下文的職業(yè)規(guī)劃】</span></strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">緊接在申請(qǐng)動(dòng)機(jī)后介紹工作經(jīng)歷，特別是工作含金量比較高時(shí)可以怎么搭建寫作框架，優(yōu)先向招生官介紹申請(qǐng)者的亮點(diǎn)內(nèi)容；</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">Tips: 另外一點(diǎn)值得參考的寫作思路就是在介紹工作經(jīng)歷時(shí)除了介紹具體的工作內(nèi)容，也可以切換思路，從多個(gè)角度（如這里的工作中的自主學(xué)習(xí)意識(shí)和執(zhí)行力、領(lǐng)導(dǎo)認(rèn)可、工作晉升、領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力）切入，說明你的突出工作表現(xiàn)，至于具體的工作內(nèi)容招生官可從建立中獲取</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">Therefore, another motivation of mine for graduate study is to achieve my professional aspirations.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【因此，讀研也是為了實(shí)現(xiàn)職業(yè)規(guī)劃。接著展開描述職業(yè)規(guī)劃】</span></strong>Looking forward, I expect to get involved in financial due-diligence in a top-tier accounting firm such as PwC or Deloitte. Such positions require practitioners to implement rigorous procedures on the target&rsquo;s financial data, business development and internal and external environments, so as to support investment decisions. Considering that this work, to some extent, is related to my previous audit work, I can make full use of my past work experience and expertise obtained through graduate studies to proactively participate in various projects and devote myself to forecasting the target&rsquo;s prospects with the help of analytical tools such as trend analysis and structural analysis. Meanwhile, I will look to pass the CICPA and AICPA examinations to upgrade my expertise. As for my long-term goal, I plan to acquire the CFA and continue to engage in financial due-diligence, with the aim of becoming an expert skilled at gaining insights from financial information and ensuring correct investment decisions made by organisations.</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">Tips: 長短期職業(yè)規(guī)劃描寫也可以涉及多個(gè)方面，比如說這里提到的未來工作對(duì)于&ldquo;我&rdquo;知識(shí)和技能的要求以及如何應(yīng)對(duì)，或者介紹你向往的工作內(nèi)容，你計(jì)劃在未來工作中取得進(jìn)步的具體領(lǐng)域，輔以如何實(shí)現(xiàn)這些職業(yè)目標(biāo)</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><br /><span class="p">Based on my personal and professional objectives, I have reviewed many advanced study programmes. Among them, I believe that the Master of Accountancy provided by Chinese University of Hong Kong (CUHK) is the optimal choice for me.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【為實(shí)現(xiàn)上述的個(gè)人目標(biāo)（學(xué)術(shù)興趣）和職業(yè)目標(biāo)（職業(yè)規(guī)劃），我深入了解了很多研究生項(xiàng)目，其中貴校的項(xiàng)目最為吸引我，繼而陳述具體的擇校原因】</span></strong>As one of the top universities in the world, CUHK attracts academic elites and industry experts from various disciplines, and enjoys a rigorous learning atmosphere and abundant educational resources, which means I will receive guidance from top-class faculty and have access to practical application skills and relevant experience in the real world. Moreover, I am most interested in your well-designed curriculum covers a wide range of topics like accounting, auditing, financial management and taxation, which is regularly updated to reflect current market trends. Through your methodical training, I believe I will acquire broad knowledge reserve in accounting while possessing distinguished analytical techniques and practical ability, preparing myself well for future development. On top of all that, the opportunity to undertake internships with established accounting firms in Hong Kong and mainland China, including Deloitte, Ernst &amp; Young, KPMG and PricewaterhouseCoopers, offered by this programme is also an important reason that attracts me to study at CUHK.</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">擇校原因可以從多方面展開，比如說這里從學(xué)校層面、課程設(shè)置、以及實(shí)習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)三個(gè)角度介紹的，其實(shí)可寫的維度遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不止這些，有選擇性地列舉2到3條即可。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">Tips: 除了從官網(wǎng)中可以獲得的有關(guān)項(xiàng)目和學(xué)校介紹的客觀信息，也可以從自身經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，寫出個(gè)性化的擇校原因，比如說本科期間參加的科研項(xiàng)目和申請(qǐng)?jiān)盒Ｄ澄唤淌诘难芯糠较蛞恢?，希望有機(jī)會(huì)展開更多交流。</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">The multiple advantages make it a fierce competition to gain your admission; still, I believe I can be a qualified candidate. Particularly, my minor in ACCA has equipped me with basic accounting, taxation and financial knowledge that will function as stepping stones for me to reach higher in the field of accounting. Also, teaching myself the knowledge of auditing and strategy in CPA introduced me to audit procedures and norms, strategy and risk management, etc.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【本科階段會(huì)計(jì)學(xué)相關(guān)的學(xué)習(xí)背景】</span></strong>Additionally, my undergraduate background in English has greatly improved my language competence, enabling me to adapt to the English-based instruction adopted by overseas institutions.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【突出一下英語技能，畢竟本科主修專業(yè)】</span></strong>Moreover, my participation in the 5th National College Students&rsquo; &lsquo;Internet +&rsquo; Innovation and Entrepreneurship Competition supported my progress in several aspects. For this, I led my teammates to complete the BJD Doll Clothing Studio project, where our teammates performed their own duties under my reasonable division of work and coordination to decide on target consumer groups, sales channels, and product styles according to relevant sales data and consumer preference statistics. Encouragingly, our efforts rewarded us with the Excellence Award and a 2,000 RMB sponsorship. Through this experience, I became deeply aware that it is vital to flexibly apply theoretical knowledge to direct practice, instead of blindly executing a given plan. Meanwhile, serving as the team leader greatly exercised my communication skills and overall management capability, which I believe will be of benefit to my future studies and work.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【商賽經(jīng)歷，體現(xiàn)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力、知識(shí)應(yīng)用能力等】</span></strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p" style="background-color: #d6d6d6;">本科階段的課內(nèi)學(xué)習(xí)這部分內(nèi)容在PS中一般簡(jiǎn)單介紹，占用較小篇幅，主要為陳述自己具備該領(lǐng)域的教育背景～至于更為具體的信息，招生官可從遞交的申請(qǐng)材料中包含的英文成績(jī)單來獲取，所以這部分內(nèi)容不用大寫特寫；另外一點(diǎn)要注意的是英文PS中不建議經(jīng)歷堆砌，內(nèi)容越多，反而就沒有重點(diǎn)，以上通過詳略的方式呈現(xiàn)出來工作和商賽經(jīng)歷，無論是從學(xué)生申請(qǐng)定位還是從經(jīng)歷的含金量來看，都表明工作經(jīng)歷更值得花更多篇幅來介紹</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p">In closing, I want to reiterate my qualifications and desire for my intended programme. I sincerely hope you can allow me to study and make progress at your university. Thank you.<strong><span style="color: #1dadff;">【簡(jiǎn)單總結(jié)】</span></strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="p"><img src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1692943992007/1692943992007.png" width="802" height="186" /></span></p>